7 comments on “The Poison Eaters

      • ‘But we no longer dare much,
        or even little; there is no
        freedom lust, no hunger
        for oblivion’

        As I read this, I just wondered if others can keep up with your pace… it sounds as if you had to wait for decisions or answers, that didn’t come, or later than you had hoped. But maybe I’m filling in now… ;)

  1. I sense there are many deeply emotional feelings hidden in this poem. Many things in life have left you feeling apathetic…I don’t believe for one minute that things that once mattered cannot be regained. It may seem to be the case when someone has been dragged through crap a good deal in their life, but maybe the things that once mattered don’t matter anymore, and new feelings and experiences step up to take their place. Your poetry speaks to this. There is a deep purging and gaining in this blog for you. You may not see it yourself, but I do.

    • Intersting thought.

      I think you can gain new things that matter – it’s more a sense of wasted opportunity … where thingw were either handled wrongly, or unappreciated when they were they, or in some sense betrayed.

      I hadn’t given much thought to what is purged and what is gained. I think that may be an issue of perspective – being inside the maze or watching from above?

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