3 comments on “Things fall apart

  1. ‘Things fall apart left to themselves –’

    Again, my sincere compliments for your poetic talent and the way you bring this to life.

    Is this a live case? If so, you may have come in a stage where you have to move on. Either stop with it, leave the other person and drop with poetry, songs etc – or move on to making a first phone call, write a mail, if you want any friendship at all. You don’t know if it will work, but not trying will definitely not work. Poetry can work as a trap, if you move towards something where you don’t really want to be.

  2. No one goes through life without ‘things falling apart’…only those who put up walls and eventually even those come tumbling down…God I can kiss every day if I choose and I don’t…I can buy flowers every day and I don’t…I hate when I choose not to live and love and laugh…you made me remember that it takes effort to do those things.

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